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1. This was great. Denise heard everything! I bet Lindsay feels that one. Lindsay and Cindy are amazing!!! I cant wait for more of your stuff 🙂

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2. Jill and Denise are a fabulous tag team here 😉 Love it. Lindsay really takes an awful long time to get it which is so her… but I think she’s making good progress. A fic update from you is really the beginning of the weekend even if it wasn’t Friday 🙂

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3. Yes, we know, Denise. You’re horny for Redhead. But she’s taken. She may not know it yet, but she’s definitely taken.

   My l 🙂 ove for this is still growing.

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4. Oooh, and now I can say that I am once again initimately accquainted with that quiet shaking laugh that you mentioned above.

   Hehehehe

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5. K- whee! An update that I found on a long weekend (for me) and so I get two L/C bits of yay! Still ewww on Denise, but Lindsay is so smitten!

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6. That was awesome. Love the last line, love Jill’s rant and Denise hearing Lindsay. 😀

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7. After getting over the shock that was chapter nine I was going to leave a comment saying “I can so smell Jill all over Denise!”, after reading chapter eleven it morphed into “I just knew I could smell Jill all over Denise!!”, now with this chapter I just have to say: I LOVE your Denise!! (She’s such a great sport) And I’d absolutely beg you to write a Jill/Denise one-shot (at least) if I thought I could convince you to; the chemistry you’ve created for those two is amazing, entirely too entertaining! Anyway great writing as usual, I can’t wait to see what’s coming next.

   Nofret.

   P.s. What happened to “Between the Shadow and the Soul”?10

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