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1. Yay, my favourite of your incompletes got an update 🙂 And what a great update it is, I love the fact that Jill now knows what is going on and has also spotted that Claire has more info.

   I’m not sure if this is the first time you’ve also posted the full number of chapters but it’s the first time I’ve consciously noted the length. The wait is going to kill me (though please don’t interpret that as inappropriate pressure to speed up).

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2. Ok before when I read I always felt sorry for Lindsay and I still do that she has lost her shot with Cindy but in this chapter I had mixed feeling I still feel sorry for Linds but I kind feel sorry for Jill although I didn’t like her when she wanted Linds to go away so she can extend her relation with Cindy. But when Linds didn’t want her there I felt bad because come she is her friend and she wants to help and be there for her. and last you can’t blame her because she fell in love with Cindy (but we can blam you;) Jill and Linds need to sit and talk very soon.

   At the end when Linds know about her father I felt realy bad how much does a person can stand before they can break down first she was hunted by a serial killer and then her love was shot and then when she decided to confess her love she found her love and best friend kissing. and finaly her father was shot because a case she was responsible for and now is in a bad condition. if I was her I would be broken by half of what she gone through.

   So I don’t know if the 14 chapters left are enough to solve this tringle thing going on with them. but if any one can make it happen is you.

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3. I love this entire plotline. I hate that it’s hurting all four of them, though. And although I hope for a happy ending, I’m not sure it’s going to be possible. But I’m going to keep hoping anyway.

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4. Loved it 😀

   Thanks for the heads-up & the BD wishes. See you soon 😉

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